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Geschrieben von Kalka am 23.02.2003 um 03:04:

  [Englisch] Alles richtig?

Hallo Leute,
wollte mal fragen ob ihr vielleicht mal den Text auf Fehler prüfen könnt, oder nur einen Teil davon. Und bitte auch eine verbesserung posten, wenn's geht Augenzwinkern

also ich wär euch echt dankbar wenn ihr euch das mal eben durchlesen und nachprüfen würdet.

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The Grand Canyon

The Grand-Canyon is one of the seven natural wonders of the world. The 
national park is in the USA - in the north of Arizona. It's the longest, 
widest and deepest canyon in the world.


The origin of the Grand Canyon

The origin of the Grand Canyon begins at the Colorado River. The River 
flow more than 5 million years through the mountainous countryside. 
During this time the River erode more and more into the ground. So the 
Grand Canyon evolved.
The Grand Canyon is five million years old, 277 miles long and 18 miles 
wide. There are two major entrys. One of the north, and one of the south 
rim of the Colorado River. The South Rim is the most famous entry point. 
There are very many people, specially in the summer. At the North Rim 
aren't so many people, and the entry is closed in winter. The elevation 
at theNorth Rim is 15, miles, and at the South Rim 1,2 miles long.


Tourismus

The Grand Canyon is a very popular vocation goal. Every year visit five 
million people the national park. You need one day to hike to the bottom 
of the Grand Canyon, and one day to hike back to the top. Don't try to 
hike to the bottom and back to the top in one day. People who try that 
often break down on the way to the top. If you visit the Grand Canyon, 
don't eat in cafeterias, beacause they're very expensive. Buy your food 
in stores at big citys, that isn't so expensive. 


cu Kalka und Danke schonmal Augenzwinkern


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